This blog post is a summary of seven of my friends twitterive's that they presented last class.
Danielle McCleery's twitterive is all about her childhood home. Danielle used a lot of great genres on her twitterive. My favorite is the story about Thanksgiving and the Thanksgiving menu. I also love the before and after pictures of the house her father built. When I read the twitterive I can feel the strong connection Danielle feels to her childhood home. I noticed today that Danielle added some updates to her twitterive that make it even stronger. Now the reader can get a sense of the emotions Danielle was feeling around the time she was leaving her home.
Rebecca Gramling'stwitterive is all about a disconnect she is experiencing with her mom. The more I read the more I discover that Rebecca's mom doesn't really listen to her. I think Rebecca's twitterive is very strong. I love the "Many faces of Mom" I also think the way she has the text fade is very creative. My favorite part of the twitterive is the letter Rebecca wrote to her mom, and then the letter her mother read.
Melanie Cress's twitterive is all about motherhood. I love Melanie's twitterive and think Lillia is too cute!! I love the use of genres in Melanie's twitterive. The ultrasound video is awesome. I noticed that Melanie updated her twitterive since last class. It is now in chronological order. This is more effective and easier to read. I love the Ukrainian phrases she added as well.
Krsitin Schoch's twitterive is all about her connection to her car, or to her escape in car rides. I really enjoyed reading Krisitns twitterive because it was so different then the norm. I love the use of genres in music videos, poetry, and road maps. Very creative overall!
Erin Suder's twitterive is all about heartbreak. I like the pics, and the text she wanted to send. Maybe Erin you could show more about the relationship, then show the break up, and then the aftermath of the breakup. I like the tombstone and think Erin should add a eulogy of the relationship. Kudo's to Erin for writing about something so painful. I am sure it's not easy.
Krista Venafro'stwitterive is all about online dating. Krista's twitterive is hilarious and very creative. I love the poetry repetend and the way it comes together in the end. I liked the class suggestion to add some more bad dates. I noticed that Krista updated her twitterive over the week and I think it looks great! Very funny!! Great job Krista!
Lauren Wiesenecker'stwitterive is all about her engagement and wedding. Lauren did a great job presenting all her information in different genres. I love the wedding dress and the poems. The slideshow is awesome!!
I think that everyone that presented did a great job and I am really looking forward to reading all of their revisions.
Danielle McCleery's twitterive is all about her childhood home. Danielle used a lot of great genres on her twitterive. My favorite is the story about Thanksgiving and the Thanksgiving menu. I also love the before and after pictures of the house her father built. When I read the twitterive I can feel the strong connection Danielle feels to her childhood home. I noticed today that Danielle added some updates to her twitterive that make it even stronger. Now the reader can get a sense of the emotions Danielle was feeling around the time she was leaving her home.
Rebecca Gramling'stwitterive is all about a disconnect she is experiencing with her mom. The more I read the more I discover that Rebecca's mom doesn't really listen to her. I think Rebecca's twitterive is very strong. I love the "Many faces of Mom" I also think the way she has the text fade is very creative. My favorite part of the twitterive is the letter Rebecca wrote to her mom, and then the letter her mother read.
Melanie Cress's twitterive is all about motherhood. I love Melanie's twitterive and think Lillia is too cute!! I love the use of genres in Melanie's twitterive. The ultrasound video is awesome. I noticed that Melanie updated her twitterive since last class. It is now in chronological order. This is more effective and easier to read. I love the Ukrainian phrases she added as well.
Krsitin Schoch's twitterive is all about her connection to her car, or to her escape in car rides. I really enjoyed reading Krisitns twitterive because it was so different then the norm. I love the use of genres in music videos, poetry, and road maps. Very creative overall!
Erin Suder's twitterive is all about heartbreak. I like the pics, and the text she wanted to send. Maybe Erin you could show more about the relationship, then show the break up, and then the aftermath of the breakup. I like the tombstone and think Erin should add a eulogy of the relationship. Kudo's to Erin for writing about something so painful. I am sure it's not easy.
Krista Venafro'stwitterive is all about online dating. Krista's twitterive is hilarious and very creative. I love the poetry repetend and the way it comes together in the end. I liked the class suggestion to add some more bad dates. I noticed that Krista updated her twitterive over the week and I think it looks great! Very funny!! Great job Krista!
Lauren Wiesenecker'stwitterive is all about her engagement and wedding. Lauren did a great job presenting all her information in different genres. I love the wedding dress and the poems. The slideshow is awesome!!
I think that everyone that presented did a great job and I am really looking forward to reading all of their revisions.
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